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Post by Person on Mar 7, 2013 17:08:47 GMT -5
In that case, the title "Broken and Together" just fits that much better.
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Post by Kiernan on Mar 7, 2013 22:42:49 GMT -5
You want to know what I want to do with Fluttershy. Understandable. Kai is still madly in love with her, she doesn't know anything about him, due to the events of my second fan fic. He erased himself from her memory, and the memories of her friends, because he is ashamed of the fact that she held him responsible for the deaths of roughly 35 ponies he brutally slaughtered. That's the history. My plans for the future involve him apologizing, if she ever confronts him about it, which I expect she will, considering how he's going to act when they do meet. He still exists in her subconscious mind, so she may have feelings for him, conflicted or no.
Of course, if she never approaches him, He's going to continue trying to find a way to justify mass murder.
That is a rough outline of my plan for them.
Speaking of plans, before I forget, how many champions are there, what do the stripes represent, and could the rainbow's stripes have turned into the elements of harmony?
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Post by Nightbow on Mar 11, 2013 3:30:41 GMT -5
There are seven Champions, on for each of the seven colours. They stand for strength, friendship, charisma, health, intelligence, telepathy, and prophecy. How they connect to the current world will be revealed. I wonder if I could bring Nightbow into "Roo in the library"? If we could somehow work it in, she could give the answer to what kind of monsters are lurking in the woods.
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Post by Becka on Mar 11, 2013 10:29:47 GMT -5
If you can find a reason for Nightbow to go to Roo's room then that's fine by me.
*grins like a fool over the Champions and future plans*
Edit: Luna wants to find Fluttershy to help Usu. Are you up to NPCing, Whisp, or should they run into Kail and Ember on the way? (Kail might not be much help right now, but Ember's a healer). Also, in Bereft of Light Whisp mentions Xanadia - do you want to go with the original plan back at C03 that Xanadia helped cure the PAARS? It still doesn't mean Hy will know of it since it was so long ago.
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Post by Kiernan on Mar 11, 2013 23:43:58 GMT -5
Finding Fluttershy, dangling her in front of Kai on a string. You want to torture him, don't you? Ah, he needs it. He deserves it. It needs to happen.
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Post by Nightbow on Mar 12, 2013 13:54:32 GMT -5
I could play Fluttershy. Sounds like fun. ... But, er, is she expected to find a cure to Usu's broken nose? ^^;
I'd prefer if we went with the original plan and had the Moon Guardians assist in the healing of PAARS, which would naturally make Xanadia known to the outside world. But I don't have any issues with the place being forgotten (should it still exist or not) for I imagine they would retreat back to their lands and stay there. Behind closed borders.
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Post by Becka on Mar 12, 2013 14:02:42 GMT -5
Cool, Roo has a book on Xanadia, so I needed to know either way Not a cure for his broken nose, but you could bandage him up a bit, at least. I think at this point he has more than a broken nose, since he got in a fight in the hospital.
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Post by Nightbow on Mar 12, 2013 17:15:08 GMT -5
Okay. I honestly missed that part. I'm so busy atm it's not even funny. I'm up for it! 'Suppose Luna and c/o would find her in the tower by now.
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Post by Person on Mar 15, 2013 11:54:57 GMT -5
D'aawwwwww Fluttershy so cute. QuQ well-written, Nightbow, well-written
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Post by Nightbow on Mar 15, 2013 14:48:24 GMT -5
Thank you. ^^; I get so nervous writing characters that aren't mine ...
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Post by Person on Mar 15, 2013 15:30:11 GMT -5
You seem to have managed quite well, and I do hope you continue in a similar fashion. ;D
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Post by Becka on Mar 15, 2013 15:43:25 GMT -5
After Bereft of Light, I can't wait for Kai to tell the Princesses that it's Kail who died. They're gonna be like "WHAT? That's not supposed to happen!" Rainbows, I love the way this storyline is building.
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Post by Person on Mar 15, 2013 16:36:04 GMT -5
Massive wall of text explaining Sil and Usu's entire situation? check
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Post by Kiernan on Mar 15, 2013 21:34:47 GMT -5
So very glad Kai's about to leave Bereft. I hate time bubbles. Now to make his presence known to everypony in searching for Fluttershy. Another fight, an injured guard, a downed cloak, the works, I think.
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Post by Kiernan on Mar 17, 2013 0:22:45 GMT -5
Yeah, feel free to come up with any injury you want for Usu. As long as he has a broken nose, is missing a few teeth, has has a few bruises and cuts, and a swollen black eye, and nothing too severe, you can imagine any injury you need to.
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